ella jade

[pre]Rose woke up thinking of all the chores she had to do that day. As she opened her eyes the events of the past few days came rushing back to ...

this is an interesting story and I would like to read more. there are a few mistakes that I'm sure you'll catch once you read over it. one thing I ...

I think that this story is good, but has the potential to be awesome. As long as you follow the advice that most of the others said you should do ...

Sorry it's took so long to put up this part. As before criticism is most definitely welcome. :D The voice surprised him as she said her name. It had a ...

the story was real good. I love the character. her boots with short shorts might be a little strange but who isn't these days. please write more it's great. ~ ...

ok, first off I usually don't comment poetry because I suck at it and probably wouldn't be much help but this one I just got to say something. my first ...

Thanks for the advice and I hope I fixed it to where it made better since. I'll write more soon. Thanks. ~ A book is like a garden carried in ...

Hey. I told you what I thought in study hall{most boring class in world right alongside ms. harrison's}you weren't trying for this to be like real poetry right? just something ...

hi! I think this story has great potential. I'd love to hear more. one question though um... what's a mage??

this part I'm not so sure, I don't know if I like how it flows. So please tell me what you think. When Jake got to the rider, Rogue was ...

I think its a very good poem and don't have any suggestions on how to make it better. It's good as it is. nice work! :elephant:

This story is something I just thought up in math class. Please tell me what ya'll think of it even if you think it sucks. Hope you enjoy the first ...

This story is something I just thought up in math class. Please tell me what ya'll think of it even if you think it sucks. Hope you enjoy the first ...

hey erin. since I told you what I thought of it earlier I'll just touch up on some things. first I argee that you kind of jump into details of ...

I agree with the others. I think you if use a little better vocabulary and not so much spacing this poem would be hit. :D